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    Okay I said before that I don't mind the character itself at all. I like the concept and design, but one thing I'd like to know is... What are the limitations to it's teleportation abilities?
    I would like to know, because I don't want a character who can teleport anywhere at will with little consequences. The same goes for shapeshifting. Just some questions I had thought of after rereading it.

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    Added that to their descriptions.



    Sometimes when you're driving down a road, a bug hits your windshield. It's ugly and unpleasant, but you just activate the wipers / cleaning fluid and it's gone in a few seconds. It's just part of driving down the road. You don't dwell on it, because that'd be silly. Bugs aren't worth the time.

    You just discard their guts and keep on driving.

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    Okay the shapeshifting limit is good, teleportation is better.

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    Actually the limit is honestly a lot better, so accepted.
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    A few things I should jot down here:

    First off, Corrections to Trace, Evi, and Cicero's story stuff:
    - Renaming the labs to Mobius Labs
    - Renaming the Encephalon to the Mobius Encephalon

    Trace and Evi Module status:

    Rough outline and stats I intend to use.
    https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets...it?usp=sharing

    Evi Abilities:
    - Evi can minimize her thermal signature and can "cancel" any sound she makes with a sound wave emitter *cough* speaker *cough*.
    - Gave Evi 2 Mutegenic abilities in the prologue.
    - - Poison Mist: Evi can secrete a potent poison vapor, which lingers where she was. Similar to VX Nerve Agent
    - - Gravity Manipulation v1: Evi can locally manipulate the direction of gravity in a 3.5 ft radius sphere of influence around her. This allows her to traverse walls and ceilings without needing her Aether Wing.

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    Soo uh Kane's app ended up being too long to fit in one post... and it's not evden close to being done so ima try doing it in two parts

    Biography:
    Chapter 1:
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    The story of Kane's childhood is a sad one. his mother Emily was kidnapped at a young age and brainwashed into being a submissive sex slave. The human traffickers responsible for abducting her sold the poor girl sold to a man in China. The man treated her like his prized possession, forcing her to dress in scantily clad clothing and call him "Tóuzi" Which meant Chief.

    Emily at least wasn't abused by her oh so loving chief, as long as she did what she was told, he praised her and treated her well enough. She didn't have any rights but at least she wasn't being beaten and starved, that's how she saw it. Eventually she even grew to love her Touzi, seeing him not as a capture, but her savior from the evil human traffickers who had stolen her. It was a lie she had wholeheartedly convinced herself of, and that's how she survived.

    When she was 19, Emily had her Tóuzi's first born child, a beautiful baby boy who was the spitting image of his mother. She named him Kane, after her own biological father. He became the last remnant of the life she used to know, the ones she used to love. She raised her son by herself, with little help from her Tóuzi. He saw the child of more of a burden than a son. Slowly Emily began spending more and more of her time tending to her child than serving her Tóuzi, making the Chinese man increasingly angry. When Kane was only about 3 years old, barely able to speak, the man who bought his mother had him sent away to a Chinese sweat shop in the middle of the night. His mother was furious with her... no with this MONSTER for what he had done.

    The lies she had told herself for all those years melted away into shame and regret as she plotted her vengeance and the rescue of her newborn, this would't stand.

    Meanwhile Little Kane was taken to a small factory in the big city where he and two dozen other young boys were all forced to work tirelessly. he cried for his mother, demanding to be taken back to her, but no one came for the crying child. The men there spanked him with thik wooden rods and told him to behave, or he wouldn't get anything to eat. His soul crushed and his heart broken, the boy complied.

    The days turned to weeks and the weeks to years. Kane's life didnt' get any better, but at least he made a few friends with the other children. Kane was the youngest among them but he was hardy and a hard worker. In fact his hard work and the fact that he never complained allowed him to slowly earn the boss's trust over time. Brooks used this to his advantage, and with the help of the other children started a conspiracy in the sweatshop.

    Every day while no one was looking, Brooks sneaked into the kitchen and stole food from the adult workers. He always took more than he could eat and brough back plenty for the other children, being careful not to leave any evidence behind. But he always made it a point never to take the boss's lunch. the adult workers there were quite furious, they started turning on each other, thinking for sure one of their fellow men was steeling all the food. The boss did question the children, but they always stck with the same story that no one had seen any of the children leave the work space.

    As time went on the workers continued updating their personal security, some of them went as far as locking their food pad locks while others were smart enough to buy cheep food from a restaurant close by. Brooks pondered what to do about this, but the clever 10 year old thought up a plan quick. That day he stole only the boss's food, leaving everyone else lunch touched. the boss hadn't paid the thefts much mind before, but today he was going on a full blown head hunt.

    In an ironic twist, the workers who had eaten outside the builder were blamed for steeling his food as they were the only ones not present while the boss was investigating the stolen lunch. Coincidentally they were also the only ones without anything in the kitchen to fix for themselves. In the boss's eyes they must have stolen it. the men got fired and were soon replaced with new workers that were a bit more agreeable.

    Kane became known as "Tígong shAng" or "provider" among his peers and to many of them, he was a hero. Things only got harder however as more food got stolen, more measures were taken to ensure the thief would be caught. They tried sending a man to watch the children, but they snuck one out hidden under a crate of socks and other clothing. One of the children "accidentally" spilt the guard's drink in his lap and while he was cleaning up in the bathroom,t he child from before sneaked the food back inside. They quickly scarfed down the food and spread the remains all around the guard's desk, getting him blamed for the theft and eventually fired.

    They tried putting a camera in the kitchen, but one of the children managed to cut the power while Kane cleaned the fridge in the cover of the darkness. Each day they would find new ways to get the food they needed to survive. This went on for about a month until the boss finally figured out what was going on. Kane had made sure to always cover his tracks or to plant fake evidence to frame someone else, what he never accounted for however is that one of his own could be working against him. One of the new child workers named Biming had been promised an easy life if he found and pointed out the food thief. the boss could have easily stopped food from being stolen by moving the fridge to his room but it wasn't about stopping the food from being stolen. The thief had made him look foolish and he wanted revenge.

    When Kane was found out, they shackled him to his work place, making it impossible for him to leave his station until his work day was over. the boss came back once every three hours to let him use the restroom, and then it was back to his chains. In addition to this, he was to be given no food until he died of starvation. the boss planned to make an example out of him to crush the spirits of the other children, but he boys were not so easily broken. Every day after retrieving their food, many of the boys would hide food in socks. they were already allowed to keep leftover bottled water at their station if they needed it during the day so there was no problem there.

    Every day after they had finished their lunch break and were told to continue working, some of the boys gave their spare food to Kane. There was barely any to spare, but when enough of them did it, there was always enough left for Kane to get the nourishment he needed to survive another day.

    Biming told the others not to feed him, that they might get in trouble, but the other children had no love for that cowardly snitch. He told them he'd tell the boss if they gave him anymore food which landed him in a world of trouble. The room of angry Chinese boys attacked Biming, throwing him to the ground and surrounding him in a circle. They'd kill the snitch before letting the Tígong shang die. Biming cried out, begging for his life, but his salvation came from the last place he would have ever expected.

    "STOP!" Kane cried out to the angry mob of children. the boys looked confused, shocked that Kane would defend the very kid who had put him in this awful situation. Biming was most supersized of all. But despite how much Kane loathed Biming for selling him out, he told the other boys to let him go, told him not to kill him and that it wouldn't accomplish anything. One of the boys pointed out that he snitched on Kane, that Biming DESERVED to die. But Kane still defended him. he told the others that we're all rejects here, that we shouldn't be fighting our own. As much as Kane hated the snitch for ratting him out, he hated the adults even more. they were the real enemy and Kane understood this.

    The other children begrudgingly let Biming go. But the next day something unexpected happened. Biming gave Kane ALL of his food that day, electing to go hungry so that no one else had to sacrifice part of their food and so Kane could still eat. He bowed on his hands and knees and begged Kane for forgiveness. His eyes weld up with tears as he expressed his deep regret and shame for his actions. Seeing him in this state reminded Kane how he felt, what life was like when he first got here. At the time he would have given anything to leave this place, to go home, even at the expense of all the other children in the shop.

    As Kane stood there, the food sitting in front of him, he couldn't help but smile. He knelt down and put a hand on his should, looked him in the eye and he spoke. "Nǐ shì wǒmen zhōng de yī yuán" meaning "You are one of us (roughly translated from google i'm sorry)

    From that day forward Biming was the loyalist of friends to Kane, making sure he always had enough to eat, even if it meant he went hungry. And when Kane did not die, the boss grew suspicious. He began staying late after lunch time, making sure everyone ate their food, but he was still only one man. Some of the children always managed to sneak some back to Kane in the end. The boss was growing more and more annoyed now and he thought of a new plan. From that day forward he fed the children chicken, diary products and any other food that went bad quickly. He then moved his desk to their work area where he could keep a close eye on Kane and make sure he didn't eat. any food saved til the end of the day would be spoiled and unfit for consumption in the hot room.

    Try as they did, the other children couldn't find a way to get food to Kane without getting themselves caught. More and more of the children were losing their food privileges due to getting caught sneaking food to Kane or being caught with spoiled food in their work station. Kane had gone two days without eating, he was starving, weak and running out of time. thankfully he still had access to clean drinking water but that could only hold him for so long.

    The children needed to act fast if they wanted to save their friend, their tígong shang, but how? With no other choice, the children plotted their escape.

    Biming spearheaded the rebellion With the Tígong shang too weak to act, Biming became his hands. The next morning the boys go to work early. Many of them were hungry or even starving from the tiny amounts of food they were given each day while the boss grew fatter and fatter. They had sneaked around the store and stolen any hard objects they could get their hands on. anything from drinking glasses, apples and even rocks brought in from outside and hid them under the pile of socks they had made the day before. More specifically they had taken each item, filled a sock with it and tied a knot in the sock to keep the hard item or items from falling out, little makeshift weapons. Then they waited for lunch time.

    The boss in hi arrogance had changed the front entrance to the work area to one that couldn't be opened from the inside unless you had they right keycard. The back exit that lead outside was a bit more traditional deadbolt that was easy to unlock from the inside, the problem was the chain over the door. It was locked, again by a key that only the boss had access too.

    Lunch eventually came and the children who could began to eat normally. taking their time and enjoying what little there was to eat. When the feeders left however and the door shut behind them, that was their time to strike. The boss who was enjoying his own chicken dinner paid little mind to the children who reached under their work stations and pulled out their weaponized socks. All at once the children rushed him with the older boys leading the way, slinging their weapons at him like a whip or a slingshot, making the impact with the old man's skull much harder than if it had been swinging a blunt object like a fist or a bat.

    The boss's cries for help were drowned out by the sick thud of glass and stones cracking against his skull. Before long he was dead, laying on the ground with a large gash in his head and whelps where he had been hit. The children took the man's keycard and the chicken dinner he was enjoying it before stuffing his body in a laundry bag. Biming then took it upon himself to take the keycard while the other children fed the severely weakened Tígong shang.

    Biming went through the door alone, knowing their small army of 2 dozen children wouldn't be enough to fight the adults. Their only hope was to not be seen. He stayed crouched low to the ground, hiding behind boxes, clothing and whatever else he could find. He was fortunate enough to find an empty cardboard box just big enough to fit a child his size, an item he could hide in that no one would suspect seeing. He put it over his head and used the side grip as an eye hole to watch where he was going. If someone was coming he would quickly drop down so that all they cold see was an "empty" box. He got pretty far doing this, but when he made it to the boss's office, he was blocked by three young adult workers who were chatting away in front of the door rather than doing their fucking jobs. It seemed the boss focusing all his attention on the children in the back gave these workers a chance to slack off, not that they did much work anyway. Biming looked around and took a peak out a window where a small band of teenagers were just outside, talking smoking and trying to look as cringey as possible.

    Biming took the glass mug from his sock and while the adults were distracted, he tossed it as hard as he could at the window and the teens on the other side of it before ducking down and hiding under his box again. The window shattered and the alarm went off, causing all the adults in the front of the shop to panic and rush towards the window. as predicted they instantly blamed the teenagers for breaking the window and confronted them. While this was going on Bimig quickly ran into the boss's office using the same keycard as before. Once inside he searched the room until he found two keys, one to Tígong shang's shackles and the other to the chain on the back door. Everything was going according to plan and he started to sneak back under the cover of his awesome new box.

    Half of the adult workers had left, chasing down the hoodlums for breaking their window while a about 3 of them remained to clean up the mess. Biming's one mistake however was not watching where he was stepping as his shoe cracked and crushed a bit of broken glass, getting the attention of the adults in the room. He instinctively dropped down, even atop broken glass to pretend he was just another empty box, but this time his ruse had failed. The adults knew there hadn't been a box their before and one of them came to investigate, carefully making his way over to the box while the other two watched from a distance. The man knelt down close to the box as Biming bit his lip and held his breath, there had to be some way out of this mess but what could he do? Gritting his teeth in pain, Biming reached down and grabbed a shard of glass laying on the floor next to him, and when the man's face was close to the box, he bursts out from the top and slashed his neck with the broken shard of glass. Bimig's face were showered in blood as the wide eyed man fell, leaving the other two adults shocked din horror.

    But Biming didn't stop there as he quickly rushed back to his friends and allies. The moment he ran through he used the keycard to close the door, preventing any of the other adults from getting inside. From there he quickly worked with the other children, unlocking. freeing the tígong shang. Kane was free for the first time in over a week, but despite having eaten a good meal, he was still weak from the days prior. Kane took the key and headed over to the door. But before they could unlock it they heard something, sirings going off, getting closer and closer until a car pulled up to the back entrance.

    The local police were here, no doubt about the broken window and the now two murders that had taken place. Kane unlocked the chain on the door and made sure the door was unlocked. When the cops came in he'd surprise attack them and then they could sneak out... But they didn't come for the back door at all. The police kicked in the front door and arrested all of the adults still cleaning up there, as wel as the ones returning from their failed attempt to capture the teenagers. Kane opened the door leading out, only to find US soldiers had the whole building surrounded. What the hell was going on?

    Suddenly the boys heard a woman cry out. "MY BABY!" Suddenly Emily came running over to her now 10 year old son. After 8 years of being apart she finally managed to track down her only son... Kane was speechless, as were the other children. all this time he thought his mother had simply abandoned him, but here she was. All these long years spent alone, she never once stopped searching for him.

    The remaining workers were arrested for the murder of the two men and the children were taken out of the country by the military. When asked where the other children had gone, the soldiers reported they had ran away the first chance they got. Turns out Emily's father had been looking for her too. Thanks to years of hard work the wold war veteran was able to prove she was being unlawfully held captive in China, and her being a US citizen put the Chinese government in hot water if they refused to comply.

    Kane and the other children were taken back to the states and enrolled in a military school where they learned discipline, how to speak English as well as a slew of other subjects. It wasn't great, but anything was better then being forced to work in a cramped room with nothing to eat. The children were happy enough, and more importantly, they learned valuable skills that would help them in the future. Kane and Biming became best friends, and eventually brothers when his mother adopted him. While many of the children eventually went their own way, weather they were adopted early on or joining the workforce when they were old enough. But Kane and Biming stuck together front that day forward.

    Chapter 2:
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    After being rescued, Kane went to live on a US military base with his mother and grandfather. Along with the other children rescued from the sweat shop, he was raised there and put through military school. Most kids now day would see such an upbringing as mean, harsh and unacceptable, but not Kane. To him and the other children, their new home was a new beginning, a second chance to live a life as more than just child slaves. So despite living in a strict environment, the children were happy. The military became their family, the soldiers their aunts and uncles staying over on an extended visit. Some people came, and some people left, but they loved and respected these soldiers.

    Brooks especially idealized the soldiers. Every night when he was young, his grandfather would tell him tales of battle, of failure and triumph, of glory and of pain. He filled the boy's imagination with stories of great heros fighting tooth and nail to save the country, to save their captured men, even just to survive. It was through these very stories that Kane learned many of the tactics he would use later in life, there were after all the inspiration that gave Brooks the drive to become as great as he imagined his grandfather to be.

    As the boy grew up, many of the other children grew apart from him, going on to get married, start businesses and join universities. Kane, Biming and six of the other children stayed though. They knew the road ahead would be difficult and dangerous, but they were all driven with a strong desire. A desire to be strong, a desire to help others, to do great things, and to never let the world hold them down again.

    At the age of 18, Kane, Biming and heir friends started their army training. Al of them showed good potential, but none of them more so than Brooks himself. Brooks was faster than any other new recruit, and stronger than most of them, but what really set him apart was his quite wit and passion for what he did. Kane was able to think outside the box and find simple solutions to complex situations. While many of the other soldiers tried to brute force their way through everything, Kane used his head. When sparing with a stronger opponent he would dodge their attacks until they let their guard down, knocking them off their center of balance and striking when they least expected it. During combat drills he utilized stealth and strategy to his advantage, making sure the opposing team would never knew where he would pop up next.

    His commanding officers were so impressed that they gave him the rank of privet first class, one rank higher than the rest of the recruits. Kane was still at the bottom of the latter, a rookie, an upstart, but among his peers he was a great soldier, among his friends a hero.

    His first year after joining the army, Kane was constantly looking for any work he and his squad could take on. He always said. "It doesn't matter if I'm on the front lines or behind the enemies. Give me work and I'll do it." Kane Brooks and his squad ended up working as cannon fodder for some of the worst missions you could imagine. Sometimes acting as bait, a distraction or a diversion, it didnt' matter. But despite the danger they put themselves in, Brooks and his men kept living. There were some cases where they had over preformed, managing to take down a platoon much larger and well armed than theirs.

    Kane's efforts didn't go unnoticed however as he and his squad continued to rise through the ranks for the next twelve years. Brooks had shown time and time again his ability on the field of battle, earning himself the rank of lieutenant. He had killed hundreds of men, captured outposts and bases and even helped on a number of rescue missions. His specialty was espionage, gathering information and sending it back to his allies, but he rarely got to do that in his platoon.

    At the age of 30, everything in Kane's life changed. The world was running out of fuel and world war 3 was starting. Brooks was morally against the war, killing for fuel and resources like beasts. But he still took part in it. Lieutenant Brooks and his squad were deployed to Afghanistan to capture their land and steel their resources, but they wren't the only ones. The Chinese soviet union was already there, long before they had arrived. the Chinese were ravaging the land, bombing villages and burning everything to the ground. The desert sand was soaked with blood and oil and there were dead bodies everywhere. They had arrived in hell.

    Lieutenant Brooks and his platoon set up in the ruins of a small town, fortifying it with guard towers, automated turrets and all the sand bags the desert could fill They kept a mostly low profile and never kept any more oil than they needed at their base of operations. Their new base became known as "Bald Eagle 1" Kane and his squad were tasked with going to the soviet outposts around their area and cleaning them out. He was also given supposed to gather information from the Chinese to help locate and extract oil deposits.

    With their limited manpower, Brooks and the others were spread rather thin when it came to their operations. Brooks was forced to complete his first mission alone without any aid from his allies. He was tasked with sneaking into a soviet outpost and destroying their comms equipment and their anti air radar. After that was done, the US air force could safely send in a bomber unit to wipe out the outpost.

    Kane made his way to the outpost under the blanket of night, armed with nothing but 6 C4 bombs, a 9mm pistol and two extra clips of ammo. He was lucky enough to have a silencer with his weapon at least. Kane used the rocks and rigid cliffs. His first obstacle was the soldier manning the spotlight. While hiding behind a rock, Kane carefully took one of his spare clips and tossed it overhead. The small metal clip landed in the dead grass behind the spotlight soldier, causing him to turn his head for only a moment to look at what it was. In the time he was turned around and started investigating the strange noise, Brooks was on the move. He swiftly yet quietly made his way up to the soldier's post. As the soldier picked his spare clip up from the grass to examine it, Brooks hopped the sandbags and grabbed the soldier from behind.

    Try as the soldier did however, he couldn't escape Kane's death grip and soon found himself fading as Brooks choke him out. He left the soldier's body passed out, but very much alive. Brooks retrieved his spare clip and stick it back on his belt before continuing to the rest of the outpost. There were three soldiers patrolling the outpost, two manning high caliber weapons and one manning a mortar. The comms towers were placed high up where they could most effectively reach and transmit signals, they would be easy enough to sneak to, however the AA radar was in the center of the outpost surrounded by the soldiers who were sleeping or keeping an eye on ally communications.

    The first two comms towers were easy enough to get too with the patrol team being on the other side of the outpost. Brooks quickly sneaked up to the one in the canter and gently tossed his first C4 bomb next to the dish. One down, two to go. the next one was a bit more tricky as he had to sneak past the patrol team in order to reach it, however using the enemies own sand bags for cover, he managed to crawl along the ground and hide behind them to avoid being spotted. Once he was a fare distance away, Kane managed to climb up a short hill and on top of the second tower. Once there he carefully placed the second C4 bomb.

    things were going great it seemed, but then an armored cargo truck drove into the outpost with 6 drums of oil in it's bed. It appeared to be on transit to it's final destination, wherever that was, but for some reason it stopped here. Perhaps the driver needed a break? Whatever the case, it made it a lot more difficult for Brooks to finish his mission. he used the destraction the truck caused to sneak down from his perch and head towards the last comm tower, fearing he'd have to wait for the truck to leave before continuing. However as if the desert itself where on his side, a sandstorm suddenly rolled in. As the wind picked up, sand and air were blown everywhere, blocking out the vision and hearing of the soldiers guarding the outpost and forcing them to retreat back inside. This was his chance.

    Wasting no time, Brooks quickly ran to the last comms tower and tossed his C$ bomb onto the dish Before the storm had even ended he quickly ran up to the AA radar machine and climbed on top, placing the final C4 bomb at the top where it could be easily destroyed. all the bombs were in place and he yet had two left over. Things were going well. However as he placed the last bomb, he could tell the storm was subsiding. With nowhere to hide and no way of making it out of the outpost in time, Brooks made a sprint straight for the truck. He hid in the back under the cover of the tarp and waited for the storm to come to an end. If the enemy were to check the cargo for any reason, he'd likely die.

    The storm cleared and the Chinese soldiers returned tot heir posts. The truck drivers took a leak in the john and took a few moments to chat before finally returning to the truck. With a few final words and some goodbyes, the driver and his passenger closed the doors to their truck, started the engine and left the outpost. Things couldn't have been going better, Kane thought to himself as the truck was leaving back towards his own base of operations. As the truck left however. Brooks took his last 2 C4 bombs and tossed them out the back end of the truck, leaving them roughly 8 feet apart. With all the pieces aligned, Brooks took his C4 detonator and set off the first bomb. The entire outpost awoke with shock from the loud explosion and went on high alert. BOOM! rang out the second explosion as the second comm tower was destroyed. At this point the soldiers were reaching for their radios trying to report their situation and call for help. BOOM! The last tower was destroyed, leaving the outpost soldiers stranded and helpless.

    Many of the soldiers tried contacting their allies, screaming in Chinese about how they were under attack. Some even seemed to think they were being bombed, but nobody answered. the truck Brooks was in stopped as the two soldiers in the truck tried to discern what was going on. Brooks quickly leaped out of the back, climbing over the tarped drums of oil and over the cab of the truck. He slid off the side, grabbing his pistol as he turned and fired two shots from his pistol. Each shot landed, placing one in the head of each of the Chinese soldiers. Kane quickly swapped places with the driver and tossed his corps on the ground, triggering his detonate once again to destroy the enemies AA radar.

    Kane had accomplished his mission, but he wasn't out of the hot zone just yet. After hijacking the truck, the enemy soldiers were finally catching on to Brooks. They sent an armored car after him, one that was much quicker than the heavy armored cargo truck. Brooks was expecting this however. Using his rear view mirrors he waited until the exact moment when the armored car would be over the C4 he had planted, and then set the last two bombs off. The armored car was actually fine, some minor damage but nothing that couldn't be repaired. however the shock from the explosion knocked the driver out and allowed Brooks to escape with the cargo and his life.

    Brooks returned back to base with the cargo in tact, the bombing run went off without a hitch and Brooks had proven himself once again. This would be the first of many sucessful missions for the soldier. Brooks became a legend in Afghanistan. The Eagle Demon, The american Super Soldier, were among the few names he came to be known by. His enemies feared him and his squad hailed him as a true American hero. But Brooks didn't find anything about their mission here to be "heroic"

    No in fact Brooks hated the war they were fighting. He had joined the army to protect and serve his nation, but all he was doing was killing for oil. I guess he was still seving his nation, but surely there had to be a better way right? He expressed his concerns to Biming who shared in his unease at what they'd done. all the needless lives they had taken, all the pain they had caused, and for what? The oil the gathered wasn't enough, it was never enough. Brooks realized for the first time, all he was, was a weapon.

    This continued for 10 long years, in which time Brooks and his men had razed 68 military bases, 500 outposts and stolen over 18,000 gallons of oil. He and his me had become the bane of the Chinese soviet union. Afghanistan had become a war torn wreck of land with it's oil deposits being quickly depleted to sate the greed of the world's governments. The sand had soaked in blood from countless soldiers and the very air itself smelled like death.

    It was almost time for them to go home, their mission complete, but the chinese military had finally had enough. One night before Brooks and his men would be returnning home they moved in for a large scale attack on their base. It had taken them 10 long years to find their outpost. They had been moving around to throw the Chinese, off, but they managed to track them by intentionally letting them steel bugged cargo.

    However before the enemy tanks could even get close. BOOM! The first tank to approach hit the mine field placed around their outpost and was destroyed. usually tanks were good at taking explosions, but they were called anti tank mines for a reason. the lookouts quickly alerted Brooks and the other soldiers. They jumped to their feet and got into position, the war was on. the Chinese fought well from a distance, sniping the small settlement with their tanks while the American soldiers fired morters and whatever else they had at the enemy.

    No matter how many land ships they took out, it seemed more kept coming their way, and from all sides. With their walls quickly falling and multiple men down, this looked like it would be their final stand. They had called for early evacuation, but it'd take at least an hour for them to arrive. Only a miracle could save them now... and just liek that they got one. Weather i was god, the devil or just sheer luck, another sandstorm rolled in. They had one chance. Brooks and Biming ordered his men to flee, each able man carrying one of their wounded allies out of harms way.

    With their heads low Brooks lead the American soldiers through the mine field, past the enemy gunfire. He knew the storm wouldn't last long, and once it passed they'd be sitting ducks for any of the tanks to decimate with their machine guns. They had one chance. They quickly mad either way to the town near by. It was old, abandoned and decrepit, but it had enough cover for them to hid the soldiers in. Unfortunately, it was also the most likely place the enemy would look when they realized the Americans were gone. Two by two the soldiers took cover in the cellar of one of the abandoned buildings. Brooks however stayed up top.

    He looked at his men and said what he thought would be his last goodbye. he took his best launcher and closed the cellar door. Using his communicator, he set the new coords for the evac to go to his men.

    when the storm cleared and the soviet soldiers could see again, the American outpost was flattened and burning. All of their equipment and defenses were reduced to scrap. They moved in carefully, clearing the remaining mines as they approached the destroyed camp. They found nothing, there was no trace of Lieutenant Brooks or his platoon. confused, they searched the surrounding area, looking for any trace of the missing men. They searched and searched for the American soldier, but even after clearing the wreckage and checking the destroyed and abandoned tanks, they still found nothing. They had vanished like phantoms.
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    The soviets were baffled at this sudden disappearance, where cold they have gone? the soviet commander ordered a squad of his men to check the nearby village for any sign of the Americans. The tanks moved in, making their way to a small bridge leading to the village, crossing over a canon. And then it happend BOOM! Right as the tanks crossed the bridge, it exploded. The C4 Brooks had planted on the bottom cause d the bridge to collapse, sending the tanks into the deep canyon and leaving them with no way to get across. The soviets looked around but saw nothing. pshhhhhh... BOOM! A rocket from a far flew through the air with great speed, striking the fuel tank of one of the tanks. The tank survived the initial impact and blast but quickly caught fire. It wouldn't be around for much longer.

    The soviets shot aimlessly into the night, with no sign of their target. "Yìzhì huǒzai" "Ta qu na'er" they cried out. the soviet commander called for backup as another rocket came in, this time from the wreckage of their other fallen tanks. Pshhhhh BOOM! Another tank sat on fire. They started to spread out, making themselves harder to hit

    The soldiers were now in a panic of this unseen soldier They quickly determined the direction the rocket had come from and opened fire while the man in the burning tank rushed to escape it as quickly as possible. Suddenly there was a loud fanning sound in the sky. as the soldiers looked on they could see it. A fleet of six soviet choppers entered the battlefield. They had been on standby. Their spotlights shined down upon the smoking battle zone, scanning the area for the enemies. Brooks quickly moved out from behind the tank he had been using for cover and aimed his rocket at the lead ship. He sot it at an angle, striking the bottom left side of the chopper. the impact jarred the pilot, causing him to black out and lose control of his chopper, it spun back and crashed into one of his allies, causing both choppers to explode, cutting the number down from six to four in only a few moments.

    However doing this gave away his position, alerting the remaining choppers to his location. Once the choppers had avoided the explosions and cleared the smoke, they took aim with every intention to fire upon the soldier, however Kane was making a beeline for the soviet commander's tank. The gunners quickly aimed their machine gun down at him, but couldn't get a clear shot as Kane dove head first under the tank they were hiding in. The choppers couldn't fire on him now or they'ed be killing their own men, their leader at that.

    The commander tried to get brooks out from under there, driving forward and back, turning and moving the tank in any way he could, but Brooks kept pace. He crawled along his stomach, rolled dived in whichever direction the tank moved, staying under it and parallel with it's treads. After trying and failing to expose Kane or run him over, the commander and his men got out of their tank. The moment it stopped, Kane placed the last of his C4 on the bottom of the tank and crawled towards the back end. Meanwhile the commander and one of his men made their way to the back, guns in hand while the other two went to the back. They aimed their rifles under the tank and prepared to open fire, but before they could pull the trigger, Kane grabbed one of the men's rifles, pulling it and the soldier by proxy into the commander's line of fire, killing the soldier in the process. Kane rolled out from under the tank, keeping the dead soviet between himself and the commander. He rolled forward and pushed his feet into the dead soldier's gut, pushing his corps into the commander and staggering him. While he was stunned Kane quickly got to his feet and rushed the commander. The soviet tried to aim his gun at the lieutenant, but he was already to close. Brooks brought his knuckles crashing into the jaw of the Chinese commander, cracking it and knocking multiple teath out of his mouth. He grabbed the commander's rifle with the underarm of his other arm and quickly turned with it in hand.

    e held the now unconscious commander with one arm while aiming his rifle at the choppers. Brooks knew they choppers couldn't fire at him while he held the commander in his arms. Even if they were skilled enough to hit him from this distance. the gatling guns on the choppers would kill him simply by being shot that close to him. Brooks opened fire on the choppers with his assault rifle. forcing them to back off to avoid being shot down. they flew out of his range, but they didn't abandoned the fight.

    The two men fro behind the tank came rushing back around the other side to rescue their dear commander, only to have Brooks push the elite soldier into them, diving into the sand before detonating the C4 under the tank. BOOM!! The vehicle went up in flames and smoke, killing the three remaining soldiers. Brooks quickly got up and started reloading his rocket launcher, all the while sprinting back towards the village.

    As the choppers came back for him, Brooks took a leap of faith, clearing the decimated bridge in a single leap. He hit the ground rolling, narrowly avoiding gunfire from the enemy gunship. He managed to take cover in the ruins of the old village, not that the cover would protect him from the gunships. Knowing his cover was weak and pointless, the gunships opened fire on the abandoned city. gatling fire and rockets decimated the city, leveling the area in a blaze of fire and napalm. BOOM BOOM BOOM! Brooks was launched from his hiding place by the kick of an explosion that struck his flimsy cover.

    He went flying onto his bak, but even then he didn't stop fighting. He took aim with his rocket launcher and fired another shot, striking the 3rd gunship and forcing it to crash land *BOOM pshhhh CRASH! There was but one enemy left. Brooks however was injured, he lay on his back, bones broken, third degree burns covering his right leg and arm. The last remaining gunship shined it's light on brooks. The pilot locked on to it's target, the on board computer aimed the guns and was getting ready to fire. Brooks looked into the bright light of the chopper and saw his life flash before his very eyes.... BOOM!

    ... Despite Kane's orders, Biming and two of the other men had left the cellar after hearing the chopper crash outside. Biming managed to make it up to the roof of the building they were in. He fired a rocket at the gunship, shooting it down before it could take the life of his friend.

    Their extraction finally arrived. Two armored US gunships crossed the sky like a beacon of hope, providing much needed cover fire to the ground soldiers and clearing out the renaming communist enemies. Biming ran over to his friend's side. Brooks was beaten, burned and broken, but he was still standing. They got him onto his feet and lead him back to the first chopper that landed, getting him the medical treatment he needed. They put a brace on his broken leg and a cast over his arm. They bandaged up his broken ribs and his 3rd degree burns and gave him some strong pain medication. The fight was over, they could finally go home.

    Biming and a few of Kane's other men were keeping a lookout for any more enemy forces while the rest of their men loaded the wounded soldiers onto the gunships. Sadly there were much more wounded at this point than able bodied men, but it was coming along well enough. They had loaded the last of the injured onto the ship and were ready to leave. The sick and injured stayed on one ship while the able bodied were on the other, made it a lot easier for the medics to tend to everyone if they were all in one place.

    The evac was son it's way back to the states. The men were at ease, they had been through hell, and came out with their lives and sanity in tact. Brooks was almost asleep, his eyelids growing heavy with every passing second. But no sooner than he had closed his eyes did their radar beep like mad. They were being followed by an aircraft, a Chengdu J-20. The fihgter jet was gaining on the gunships quickly, and would be within firing rang in seconds.

    the first rockets were fired, heat seekers. They flew towards the gunships which narrowly avoided them when Biming shot off several flares, diverting the rockets away from the two gunships. the J-20 overshot the gunships and was forced to turn around, but that would give the Americans just enough time to brace themselves. Kane quickly got off his sleeping ass and over to the gunship's side cannon, a GAU 8 Avanger. As the gunship took evasive maneuvers, Kane fired at the J-20 in an attempt to give the other gunship cover fire. Brooks knew he had a snowballs chance in hell at hitting a speeding jet from this distance while he himself were making evasive maneuvers, but hopefully he could distract the pilot long enough for Biming to get into position.

    Biming meanwhile and his pilot were trying to get a lock on the enemy pilot. The J-20 had turned around and was on it's way back. Again it fired rockets at the gunships and again, they fired off flares as a decoy, only these missiles weren't heat seekers. They were computer guided, heading right towards their mark. Brooks managed to shoot a few of the missiles down before they reached the gunship, but it wasn't enough. With so many sick an injured on one ship, there was no way they could evacuate everyone.

    Just as all hope seemed lost, Biming took control of the other gunship and make the ultimate sacrifice. He and his fellow men drove straight between Brooks and the oncoming missiles, guarding them from the blast. The ship survived the initial blast, but it was far to damaged to maintain altitude. As the ship was going down, Biming took a FIM-92 Stinger and leapt out of the burning gunship, taking aim at the J-20 as it turned around for a final attack. He waited for what must have felt like hours as he fell, the gun finally locking on to the plane before he fired the shot that would save the lives of his fellow man.

    Kane's heart sank in his chest. He clenched his teeth and grabbed hold of his parashoot before running and leaping out of the gunship. He dove straight down, reaching desperately for his friend. He didn't even know if the rest of his men were alright, if they had made it off the ship or if they had gone up in flame, all he knew was that his best and closest friend was about to fall to his death if he couldn't stop it. As he reached terminal velocity, he finally fell close enough to biming to grab him. He strapped the soldier to his vest and opened the shoot, trying to slow their fall enough so that they could both survive, but by then it was too late. They hit the waer a bit to fast, and then there was darkness. Lieutenant Brooks lost consciousness...

    The U.S. coastguard found Brooks floating in the ocean a few days later. He was alive, barely. Biming's body was never found. This was only a few days before the war finally ended, they were so close, and yet so far off. Biming was MIA and Brooks was in a coma. But despite this, Kane was awarded the Medal of Honor for his services and bravery on the battlefield. Both him and Biming were promoted to Colonel in honor of their sacrifice.

    "It is well that war is so terrible, or we should grow too fond of it."
    --Robert E. Lee
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    Kane Brooks (WIP)
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    Name: Kane Brooks (Code named Kobalt)

    Race: Human

    Age: Physically 45 But he's been around since before the great war. He was cryogenically frozen 97 years until they were able to cure him.

    Appearance: I swear I looked at hundreds of images but I couldn't find one better than this.
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    Personality: Having been a soldier for a very long time, Brooks is very desensitized to violence, war and even loss. He believes that while the past can never be changed, his future is his to control. So long as Brooks is alive He'll always have something to strive for. you could take everything away from him and he'd start all over again from the beginning. He's both to stubborn and and determined to ever give up no matter what losses he faces.

    Brooks is often hard to read except by those capable of understanding him. He's often misunderstood, even by his fellow soldiers. Some see him as a hero, others as a demon, some even think him a machine devoid of emotion and desire. But Brooks is nothing if not passionate. While he sees himself as a dog of war, a human weapon, he whole heartedly believes in peace. He fights so that one day there wont' need to be anymore fighting.

    In fact, despite him being a legendary soldier in his own right, Brooks will often use non lethal methods of combat on his enemies. He won't hesitate to kill if he needs to, but he would rather not take a life of a good soldier trying to do his job. Likewise if one of his own is captured, missing or even gone rouge, he'll stop at nothing to get them back alive. Brooks doesn't just honor and respect his fellow soldiers, he loves them. They are his friends and family. Brooks strongly believes that a leader should be a servant to his people and prides himself as loyal to his men as they are too him. As such he is unhappy with the government's self serving policies and seeks to reform them.

    Brooks is a bit of a human purist. He holds no bias or hatred for psychics, super soldiers or Animalia, but he values his own humanity and refuses augmentation. He however will not treat any of said groups differently than he would a normal man. To him a person's actions define them, not their race.

    Abilities: Brooks has no special psychic powers are super human augmentations to speak of. He has however over years of training and experience got a faster reaction time than average humans. Currently Brooks can react 2.5 times faster than your average man with the possibility of reacting 4 times faster under certain conditions. He's had drug resistance training making him resistant, but not immune to things such as sleeping gas and psychedelics. He also has a higher pain tolerance than most, rivaling that of even the toughest super soldier.

    He's very strong, being able to bench 600 pounds and preform other impressive acts of peak physical human ability. Such feets include being able to sprint 24MPH while carrying heavy equipment,, Jumping a length of 30 feet and having an erection for 8 hours, twice as long as doctors say one should last before calling them.

    Skills: Brooks has trained for years in the art of CQC and as such has learned how to fight at close range, against multiple and even armed enemies.He can take a knife or firearm out of your hands without getting cut or shot, knows how to use a knife as a deadly weapons and knows where to hit you to most effectively knock you out or kill you.

    Brooks has also trained using every type of weapon imaginable from hand guns to rocket launchers to anti air cannons and artillery. He's memorized how to use, reload, dismantle and reensemble every gun currently known to man. His accuracy is very keen and almost always on point. Though he might be a bit slower than some super soldiers, he's yet to lose a sniping match with one of them.

    However despite his extensive combat experience, Kane's bread and butter is espionage. His ability to infiltrate and gather information while renaming undetected is by far his greatest skill. He often uses this along with superior strategizing to take down targets who are stronger than he is or take down many enemies at a time.

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    Weapons:
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    SIG MCX-FA
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    Caliber: 5.56x40 NATO
    Action: Semi-auto gas piston w/ full auto secondary fire
    Barrel: 16 Inches
    Weight: 6 pounds
    Velocity: 3257.9 ft/s
    Capacity: 30
    Misc: Red dot sight Gun is silent

    Barrett M107CQ
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    Caliber: .50 BMG (12.7×99mm NATO
    Action: Recoil-operated Semi-auto
    Barrel: 20 inches
    Weight: 29lb
    Velocity: 3,044 ft/s
    Capacity: 11
    Misc: MIL-STD-1913 rail Scope

    M16A4
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    Caliber: 5.56×45mm NATO
    Action: Semi-auto
    Barrel: 20 inches
    Weight: 7.18 lb
    Velocity: 3,260 ft/s
    Capacity: 30
    Misc: ACOG Scope, flash suppressor, free-floating barrel, Silent

    Widuger SP
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    Caliber: Tranquilizer Dart
    Action: Semi-auto
    Barrel: 4.9 in
    Weight: 970 g)
    Velocity: 1,180 ft/s
    Capacity: 10
    Misc: Silent

    Combat Knife
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    Caliber: Ex
    Action: Stabbing
    Barrel: nigga you wut?
    Weight: 12.5 oz
    Velocity: Fast as you cna swing that shit
    Capacity: 1
    Misc: pointy



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    ET-MP
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    Type: grenade/Frag & Overpressure
    Fuse: 4 seconds
    Effective Killing Radius: 8 meters
    Capacity: 12
    Misc: the ET-MP was the first grenade to be built with an electric fuse back in 2020. It can switch between fragmentation mode or overpressure with the simple rotation of the cap.

    SG-T2
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    Type: Knock out grenade
    Fuse: 5 seconds
    Effective Knock Out: 10 meters
    Capacity: 4
    Misc: The SG-T1 is a sleeping gas grenade that uses Dimethylheptylpyran (a powerful sedative) to silently knock out enemies who breath it in.

    DMHP-Mine
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    Type: Land Mine (sleep gas)
    Fuse: Instant
    Effective knock out: 10 meters
    Capacity: 4
    Misc: Uses Dimethylheptylpyran

    C4
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    Type: High-yield chemical explosive
    Detonation Mechanism: PETN-based detonating cord
    Effective Killing Radius: 12=14 meters
    Capacity: 12
    Misc: A plastic explosive that can be stuck to almost any surface and remotely detonated from a distance.

    AT-Mine
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    Type: Landmine
    Detonation Mechanism: Pressure sensor
    Effective Killing Radius: 10 meters
    Capacity: 8
    Misc: Meant for heavy tanks and armored vehicles. Will most likely not go off if a human or super soldier steps on the mine. Unless of cores the super human is wearing heavy enough armor.

    M18A1 Claymore mine
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    Type: Landmine
    Detonation Mechanism: Blasting Cap Assembly M4
    Effective Killing Radius: 10 Meters
    Capacity: 8
    Misc: Anti persinal mines meant for people

    AP-Decoy
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    Type: Diversion
    Detonation Mechanism: PETN-based detonating cord
    Effective Killing Radius: NA Decoy is is hot and will electrocute anyone who tries to melee it.
    Capacity: 8
    Misc: Decoys are set to inflate on demand and have a build in speaker to allow either pre-recorded messages or ones spoken into a mic in real time.




    Other: (For anything else that might not have fit in the rest of the app. Like extra notes, or questions.)
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    How's it going with that priest guy? :P
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    Never Forget,
    Keep Fighting.

    –Don't Forget.
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    –As long as you remember her,
    you are not alone.



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    Just in case people, Edward's app is done, and as far as I know, it's ok.
    Have you ever crossed the line between sanity and madness? You would be amazed by what lies beyond the fog..

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    @Katrix: He's a real.. PRIEST of shit! :3333

    But nah I'm working on characters in the order that I'll need them in the RP so he's next on my chopping block.

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    Hey guys, wanted to apologise for not posting, have had a severe case of writer block as of late. I Promise to write for erica and senna when I am done work tonight.

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